Documentary Feedback

We got lots of feedback about our documentary. Many said it was entertaining to watch but could have been taken more professional with it looking quite amateur compared to others. They also said how the interviews were full of info and felt like interviews in a real documentary. they did so how we could have added more information like stats and techniques but that the info which was present was good and informative. the pacing of the documentary was also said to be to fast pace with it not giving the viewer time to think properly as it was already on to the next bit but they said the music help keep them entertained during the transitions. mostly the feedback was about having a proper plan instead of improvising so much and that with a proper plan we might have been able to get more information into a documentary. I feel if i was making it again i would add a lot of changes that i have received from my feedback. first off i would have tried to make it more professional with less improvising. i would try to edit it so it feels less jerky with some of the editing feeling clunky and not as smooth i would like it. I would have also like to make it feel not as fast pace giving the viewers time to think and remember stuff in the documentary. it would also have been nice to add more infomation into my documentary just so it feel more like a documentary. I would have also made a plan just so we knew what we was doing when making the documentary. it would have helped with a plan as we would have an order to edit it into and also to keep the interviews in a better order making it easy to watch.